P01a neon sign above a ramen shop that reads "OPEN UNTIL 3AM", night street, shallow depth of field
- ✓“OPEN UNTIL 3AM” is spelled correctly across three lines of red neon
- ✓Its top aesthetic mark: red tube-glow spilling down a tiled facade, the sign the only light in frame
- ✗Shot flat and frontal against a wall, so the shallow depth of field clause never gets a chance
- ✗The awning fascia degrades into pseudo-text, reading “RamEar INTGIL” and “Amtint Loam”
- •Solid rather than standout on text, the letters hold but the scene does the heavy lifting







